The still life 365 January mid-month challenge was to take any of the 42 words featured in the community poem (and below) and write a haiku with whichever words move you. If you submitted more than one, I took the first one submitted.
the words: cruel raw yearn anger forever jaded distant unimaginable borrowed changed why empty pointless relentless tender lonely random almost rage vulnerable love abundant missed miraculous broken dust sad opened love searches connected hole fire daughter precious cherished lost absent love fury beautiful unbearable
Here are the haiku submitted for this challenge:
one.
My precious baby
You turned cold. I turned raw, numb.
Relentless fury.
by Elizabeth Davis of Safe in this House
two.
When I visit her
I am less lonely seeing
A path in the snow
by Heather Egger
three.
The tears are pouring
I ache to hold you again
Unbearable love
by Krissy of Thinking-of-blue
four.
Worlds within one word
I yearn, you rage, she burns. Still.
One word too many.
by Jess of AfterIris
five.
anger burns within
still searching for reasons why
grief is relentless.
by Sally of Tuesday's Hope
six.
miraculously
raw. unbearably opened.
rage-love, forever.
by Kara, aka Mother Henna of all things Mother Henna.
seven.
Untitled XXXIX
vulnerable rage
palatable brokenness
beautiful anguish
by Michele Haytko of My Life After Loss
eight.
His Is, We Are
relentlessly loved
cherished, precious, almost ours
now lost, forever
by Chris of Elm City Dad
nine.
Cherished, lovely son
Silently enters the world
I'm sad sad sad sad
by AnnaMarie of Garden of Butterflies
ten.
cherished lonely love
unbearable beautiful
forever missed son
by Ines of Fionn
eleven.
unbearable death,
relentless in its always.
broken i am dust.
by angie of still life with circles
Thank you to everyone who submitted a haiku. Hope this mid-month challenge was inspiring. Community poem submission rules will be up later today. Thanks for your patience.
Well done everyone, well done Angie. A great mix here.
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All so full of emotion and beautifully done.
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ReplyDeleteThese are amazing. It gave me chills to read these.
ReplyDeleteWow. These are really moving. Note to self, do not read blogs in public places.
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So beautiful, all of them.
ReplyDeletethese are lovely. so interesting to hear all your different voices. xo
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poems all.
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ReplyDeleteThanks so much for hosting this space, Angie. Really moving pieces here... thank you everyone for sharing your heARTs this way... miracles, k-
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